Fangala the Flying Feline

I have nothing bad to say! You have a talent for creating a mood and time period with your desciptions. I could totally see this old man. :D Oh, and ...

Sweet! I loved the light, blissful tone to this; it perfectly captures the mood of little kids' birthday parties. Hmm...I was going to comment on the first sentence, but you ...

Indeed, very sweet. You definitely have a way with words. However, my mind wandered while reading this, but it was most likely due to my little sister screaming that she ...

DRAGON!!!!!!! As for my daemon, it would either be a spider (because they're the archetypal writers) or a river otter (because they like having fun.)

Um... Well, your saving grace is your emotion. I could tell you spilled your soul into this poem, so that's the good news. The bad news is that is this ...

Well, I must say I really enjoyed this! Your first stanza was the best, thanks to the line, "Blood is not ketchup." That line saves the poem. Without it, it ...

Wonderful as always. What can I say? Well, I can say that you used my name. Was that before or after you knew it? Just curious. Is there anything you ...

Wow. I must say I'm pleasantly surprised at the reviews I've received. I mean, it's a poem about A CROISSANT, you guys! :D Thanks for all the lovely reviews!

Yes, Chapter Two! I've been wondering what happened to you, wolf girl. :D Bravo. This is much better than chapter one. I like Asriel's spunk; she's one of those protagonists ...

Thank God, somebody replied to this! I was like: am I that boring? Favorite color: varies, but I like olive green, silver, and purple (but not together :)) Favorite Shirt: ...

Wow. For your very fantasy, I'm very impressed! Your characters are indeed very likeable, but you can easily go into more detail. A story like this benefits from being character-driven, ...

This is my sonnet! I chose the object theme. The secretary offers HeartGuard pills and gestures to the swollen, pickled heart of a worm-ravaged dachsund dog named Bart. "Please protect ...

Yay! This is quite a few steps up from your don't-do-drugs advertising jingle. :D I thought it was really sweet and heartwarming, like Acoustic up there said. I can relate ...

Yup, you should definitely write slogans! :D This isn't exactly a poem, but I think it's cute. I especially like how the last line doesn't rhyme. It's like you're smacking ...

Hi, Azila! I love this, but I won't say any more, because I'm running the contest. :D Yay, I love Miyazaki! Have you seen Whisper of the Heart? That's my ...